Sabotage
L.O.R.D.S. #4
By Shantel Tessier
~ Can be read as a standalone ~
TheStory
Stepsiblings Colton and Raylee have hated each other for years. But that hasn’t stopped them from fulfilling their physical desires. After a particularly brutal betrayal by Colton and subsequent retaliation by Raylee, Colton decides he’s done playing games. Raylee is meant to be his and he’ll make sure she crawls to him, regardless of the lines he has to cross.
TheReview
What… happened… to the rest of the pages?
Have these books not been well over 500 pages?! And this one is less than 250? I finished it in like five hours………
Don’t get me wrong… I liked it. But I didn’t really have time to get into it very much.
Essentially, stepsiblings hate each other. They bang. MMC decides he wants to claim the FMC. It’s a struggle. The end.
Again, it was good but it was so short and so simple.
I loved the way they hated each other but in the bedroom, everything was different.
Besides, the length of the book and simplicity of the storyline, I didn’t really understand the 180 degree turn from “badass, feisty, sassy” Raylee to “crying, sobbing, begging mess” Raylee like a switch was flipped. One minute, she’s setting his car on fire and slapping him in the face to the very next moment, begging him in the bedroom. I just would have like some transitional scenes to make me feel more connected to the feelings.
End rant.
I mean, it was good, but it was really short and lacked filler information that would have made for a more in depth understanding and connection to the characters (which could have been fulfilled with an extra 100 pages or so).
ProminentTropes
Enemies to Lovers
Morally Grey MMC
Forced Proximity
Stepsiblings
Secret Society
TheRating
Storyline: 3/5
Characters: 4/5
Side Characters: 4/5
World Building: N/A
Writing: 3/5
Overall: 📘📘📘
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️